Saturday, 20 June 2020

Is "additional entertainment" an acceptable term here?

Frederic Engellant: yes

Collin Pelfrey: I think I get what you're saying, but it's not particularly good English. Try: 'I bought this notebook to further entertain the family' or 'I bought the notebook to provide additional entertainment for the family.'

Marti Declue: I bought this notebook as an additional entertainment FOR the family.Or you could just say I bought this notebook for family entertainment.

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